“[She] rolls her eyes. I think her breasts roll in sync with them. Girls’ breasts are so amazing.”
You can write female characters as a man, but these authors took it a little bit too far. When you’re tackling the “humanitarian” aspect of those characters, you could pass. But some examples are just incredibly funny in describing erotica in action and thought.
Describing erotic scenes is one thing, but showing apparent childish enthusiasm is another. These male writers were not meant to write anything feminine, and someone needs to tell them so. Read these excerpts and you’ll lose it completely!